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buttercupbaby
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outside in the rain


0 posted 08-25-2006 12:49 PM       View Profile for buttercupbaby   Email buttercupbaby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for buttercupbaby


you won't see her cry
when you hurt her inside
you won't see her cry
it would hurt her pride


you won't see her cry
whe you let her down
you won't see her cry
cause she knows you'd just frown


you won't see her cry
when your words cause her pain
you won't see her cry
cause she knows you' just say she's insane


you won't see you cry
when you break her poor heart
you won't have to see her tears
cause you said goodbye

and i went home and cried and cried.

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cherrys_rule
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1 posted 08-26-2006 01:32 PM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrys_rule

awww that's a sad poem, I like this one alot. I hope to see more of your poems in the future. Thanks for sharing.
buttercupbaby
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2 posted 08-26-2006 05:23 PM       View Profile for buttercupbaby   Email buttercupbaby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for buttercupbaby

yeah, i was really sad when i wrote it. thank you for replying, ttyl.
-missy
hunnie_girl
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3 posted 08-26-2006 11:38 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

wow i liked this poem hope to see more from you in the near future:P good post
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

buttercupbaby
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4 posted 08-28-2006 10:02 AM       View Profile for buttercupbaby   Email buttercupbaby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for buttercupbaby

sorry i haven't been posting much lately, im trying to force myself to write, but i can't! i hate posting my poetry that isn't good at all, so theres only few that i can post!!=) thanks for the support though.
-missy
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5 posted 09-03-2006 07:58 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

Aw, what a sad poem.  I hope you're feelings better now, just stop crying and smile!

~Alli~
mgoodman1989
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6 posted 09-04-2006 05:20 PM       View Profile for mgoodman1989   Email mgoodman1989   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mgoodman1989

I like this one much better then the last one I posted on by you. Very original. And we've all been there Hun, only difference is, you've got us (here at pip) to help you thru your hard times. Hope everything is well,
Much love,
Michelle

*I love him oh yes I do, he's for me and not for you, and if by chance you take my place, I'll take my fist and smash your face!*

nick_lyss
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7 posted 09-30-2006 05:58 PM       View Profile for nick_lyss   Email nick_lyss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nick_lyss

this is a poem but its reallt good
stil_watrs_run_deep
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8 posted 01-05-2008 02:18 AM       View Profile for stil_watrs_run_deep   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stil_watrs_run_deep

that is an AMAZING poem!

i loved it.. it hits really close to home for me..

you are great!

keep it up!

smiles are universal :]

 
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