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Ode to Time Displaced

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gozaggss
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0 posted 08-25-2006 12:15 AM       View Profile for gozaggss   Email gozaggss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gozaggss


Strong winds compel me to write this
About all the things that i will miss
Like the sun and the beach. Those carefree days
But it's too bad that nothing good ever stays
The days become shorter, no time for a game
Less fun, more work, it's always the same
Tests and homework, stress and Drama
a fight with a friend, the death of a grandma
Those long but short days...
I'm gonna miss those too, but nothing good stays
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bekahlekah45
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1 posted 08-25-2006 01:24 PM       View Profile for bekahlekah45   Email bekahlekah45   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bekahlekah45

mmmm....short but sweet most definitely.  I'd hafta disagree with you though. Theres always one good thing that stays.  The Lord Jesus Christ will NEVER leave you : )
But this poem is very good and i enjoyed it alot
thanks for sharing!
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2 posted 08-28-2006 11:58 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

i liked this i felt the truth coming from this poem but.... not everything good leaves...and if it does it leaves a memory behind... some of that that are good ...
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