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things i never noticed

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0 posted 08-24-2006 11:13 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for hunnie_girl

watching the world go by,
without so much as the question why,
as i let out a mechanical sigh,
i think back to when i used to try,

i used to be someone who cared,
i wonder now how i could have dared,
to be childishly stupid and scared,
as if it's more than i could have beared,

now i move as if in a dream,
makes me stutter out a scream,
things appear not what they seem,
with those things i never noticed.

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

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1 posted 08-27-2006 11:57 AM       View Profile for pen&paper   Email pen&paper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen&paper

I think this is something anyone could relate to in a sense. No one really knows what your on about and in this case its a good thing.

Keep up the good work!
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Yep, I really relate to this poem as well.
Thank you for sharing!

~Alli~
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3 posted 09-04-2006 04:19 PM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrys_rule

I really like this poem. I also can relate to this in some way. Good write, and thanks for sharing.
                ~Courtney~
 
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