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One Day... MY FIRST POEM

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nostalgic*pride
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0 posted 08-23-2006 06:33 PM       View Profile for nostalgic*pride   Email nostalgic*pride   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nostalgic*pride

One day this senseless pain will cease
And blood will stop itís spill
One day the walls will crumble down
Youíll feel the way I feel

But for now I must content myself
With living on in pain
Clutching to a shard of hope
That I wonít go insane

You donít seem to understand
Just exactly what itís like
To stand there dying silently
After every little fight

One day youíll hold me in your arms
Whispering apologies
One day we'll smile together
In a blissful harmony

But for now I must simply daydreaming
Of a once and future life
Where everything will always be beautiful
All it needs is a little time

You donít seem to understand
How it feels after every blow
Iím in the Hell youíve locked me into
But you will never know

One day weíll be a family
Not normal- though thatís alright
One day youíll make your daughter happy
And bring back the light
© Copyright 2006 Haley May - All Rights Reserved
rhia_5779
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since 06-09-2006
Posts 1304
California


1 posted 08-23-2006 07:00 PM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rhia_5779

that is soooo good.   i loved this. amazing. wonderful first post.

hope you enjoy piptalk. Welcome!!!!

definetly a poem im gonna read again
stargal
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since 03-06-2006
Posts 1350
OR USA


2 posted 08-23-2006 09:59 PM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

Hi nostalgic*pride,

Welcome to passions!~ It is so exciting to see a new face on the site and even more so to read the poems they bring forth... Hope you love the site as much as I have and I'll be looking forward to reading more of your poems. This one was very, very good; full of lots of emotions, you did a good job conveying the emotions to the reader.

Thanks for sharing

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
ĖSocrates
                     @-->---

Sunshine
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since 06-25-99
Posts 67715
Listening to every heart


3 posted 08-24-2006 09:57 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Welcome to Passions, Nostalgia...

This is a very honest poem, and one that runs ripe with pain and love...

I would hope that this is but a passing in your time, or a knowledge of others you know, and you are emoting for them;

be that as it may, I do welcome you to Passions, and hope that you will find the Special Greeting in your email to be one of special meaning to you.

Sunshine

hunnie_girl
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since 06-18-2006
Posts 2539
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4 posted 08-24-2006 10:50 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

wow that was an awesome first post i hope to read more from you soon cuz that was great:P and WELCOME TO PIP ... i hope you enjoy it here... i know i do
all best wishes
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

mgoodman1989
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since 03-05-2006
Posts 93
Iowa, USA


5 posted 08-26-2006 06:22 PM       View Profile for mgoodman1989   Email mgoodman1989   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mgoodman1989

This poem, as your first, is seriously a lot better then alot of ppl's 3rd and 4th poems. (not thinking anyone in particular) and is way better then anything i've written....

you have a real talent... keep it up, and continue to share

Much love,
Michelle

*I love him oh yes I do, he's for me and not for you, and if by chance you take my place, I'll take my fist and smash your face!*

 
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