Omgosh! This is like, wow, I can't even think of a word to describe how much I liked it and how good I think it is... lol
My favorite part would have to be the ending though; The ending had a bit of a twist, it wasn't what I was expecting, which, I liked that, things that you don't expect are my favorite kind of poems...
Thanks for sharing
"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."