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Tempest
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0 posted 08-22-2006 08:50 PM       View Profile for Tempest   Email Tempest   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tempest

im just a wanna be
someone that every one knows
that one guy
thats always at the show

up on stage
and playing out his soul
singing his song
thats out of control

the crowds would stretch
to endless limits
i would be the guy
telling everyone theres something in it

the only one
with a rockers core
as true and blue
as the ancient lore

when i play
i feel alive
i feel so good
like i cant die

god, what i wouldnt give.....
to be that guy
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1 posted 08-23-2006 12:54 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

wow, that was amazing... i love all your poems but i really thought this was my favorite by you... i can really relate to this well..... except for the guy part:P but this was beautifully written... good write hope to see another poem by you soon.
hunnie*

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bekahlekah45
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2 posted 08-23-2006 01:32 AM       View Profile for bekahlekah45   Email bekahlekah45   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bekahlekah45

when i play
i feel alive
i feel so good
like i cant die

yes i can sooo relate to that...
i LOOOOVE this poem alot!  amazing job.  i really really really like it
stargal
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3 posted 08-23-2006 11:04 AM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

Omgosh! This is like, wow, I can't even think of a word to describe how much I liked it and how good I think it is... lol

My favorite part would have to be the ending though; The ending had a bit of a twist, it wasn't what I was expecting, which, I liked that, things that you don't expect are my favorite kind of poems...

Thanks for sharing

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surf_painter
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4 posted 04-10-2007 08:59 PM       View Profile for surf_painter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for surf_painter

oh wow that was wow you captured feelings that can only be captured in a poem like yours very well done
~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~
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5 posted 01-14-2011 08:23 PM       View Profile for ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~   Email ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~

i really really really liked this poem i can so relate to this i like its Awesome!!!.....GREAT JOB

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