I guess I have to agree with everything said above^^ I found it to be an enjoyable read though, it made you think, to question the meaning of the poem. It was a great mind stretcher!
Also, Welcome to passions!~ I hope you enjoy the site as much as I have.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful first post with all of us, it was a treat to read
"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."