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Are You Happy With Your Life?

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Tempest
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0 posted 08-22-2006 04:17 PM       View Profile for Tempest   Email Tempest   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tempest

Sit down
Take a look at your life
Do you feel good about yourself
And how you feel inside

This is a material world
Its nothing new to you
The world revolves around looks
And you know its the truth

You arnt popular
And this tweaks your hate
But you cant blame them
For what they state

So you resolve you anger
By draining the whole bottle
Do you love your suicide
Your taking it at full throttle

Inhale deeply
And beath in your death
Exhale the pressure
Can you see through this mess

So sit down
And take a look at your strife
Are you happy with yourself
Are you happy with your life
© Copyright 2006 Bryan Girton - All Rights Reserved
mgoodman1989
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since 03-05-2006
Posts 93
Iowa, USA


1 posted 08-22-2006 04:28 PM       View Profile for mgoodman1989   Email mgoodman1989   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mgoodman1989

Powerful Write!!

Me likey

Much Love,

Michelle
the_girl_next_door
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since 02-26-2006
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2 posted 08-22-2006 10:31 PM       View Profile for the_girl_next_door   Email the_girl_next_door   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_girl_next_door

I very strongly agree..

I loved this..

~heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

bekahlekah45
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since 03-14-2006
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3 posted 08-23-2006 01:35 AM       View Profile for bekahlekah45   Email bekahlekah45   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bekahlekah45

okay goin in my library, Such a good write.  
and isnt it so true that people revolve everything around looks...WHO CARES ABOUT LOOKS HONESTLY!!! sigh...its sad how people judge others...im speaking to myself here too.  man...we as humans can be so prejudice and just ahh! okay you brought up lots of thoughts in my mind as u can see

i love this poem.  its amazing.
hunnie_girl
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4 posted 08-23-2006 02:02 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

this was beautifully written.... i can kinda relate to some parts of this poem unfortunatly but this was awesome hope to read more form you.
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

stargal
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since 03-06-2006
Posts 1350
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5 posted 08-23-2006 11:01 AM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

Wow! The flow and the meaning in this poem was more than amazing, it was more like brilliant. I loved this poem; how the words just seemed to flow off your tongue into the next word. I think that this is one of the best I've seen you write, it is very, very good.

Thanks so much for sharing this one; I'm glad I didn't miss out on reading it

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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