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Nothing Girl

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just_a_girl
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0 posted 08-21-2006 08:54 PM       View Profile for just_a_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for just_a_girl


Maybe I wear baggies
and white socks with flip-flops,
maybe I don't like listening to rave
and I'm not on the social mountaintops,
maybe I don't care about the things
that make your worlds twirl,
maybe you look at me and think:
Gee, what a nothing girl.

Maybe I like giving smiles
which seems to be a sin today,
and maybe I allow my imagination
to sometimes run away,
maybe you don't understand this
and that's why you cannot see,
if this make me a nothing girl,
hey, that's ok with me!

The world makes you believe
your personality mustn't be detected,
your face must be picture perfect
and wear clothes just the best, to be accepted.
Maybe I look at you
and feel sorry that you're blind,
robots you have become,
yourself you'll never find.

God made you, as well as me,
this means I am something,
the world is a liar
and if I must be a nothing
for you to see it,
then so be it!
© Copyright 2006 just_a_girl - All Rights Reserved
stargal
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1 posted 08-21-2006 09:20 PM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

Hi just_a_girl,

Welcome to piptalk!~ It's always nice to see new faces in the teen forum and I hope you like your stay with us

This, btw, is an awesome first post! I loved this poem, I liked how it was kind of rebelious, I'm me and I'm going to be me and you can't stop it sort of thing.

Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece with us. I hope to see more of your work in the near future!

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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hunnie_girl
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2 posted 08-23-2006 02:06 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

where did you write this poem i'm sorry to say but.....i've seen the same poem posted a year ago by a different name on another part of this site...it's kind of comfusing i remember it from a year ago cuz i really liked it but....i'm running out a loss of words...unless you copied it of tearsofpearls cpoied it or your the same person just wondering cuz yea..........?
hunnie*

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rhia_5779
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3 posted 08-23-2006 04:37 AM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rhia_5779

i really liked that poem. it was really amazing. great first post
just_a_girl
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4 posted 08-23-2006 07:48 PM       View Profile for just_a_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for just_a_girl

Hunnie_girl,

It is the same person. I just never posted anything on this website.
hunnie_girl
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5 posted 08-23-2006 09:16 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

okaie hmmm and i really am sorry if i appeared so well....meen haha the bad side of me:P but...that was an awesome poem the first time i read it on the other part of the site i loved it and it still remains my most favorite seeing as i can relate to most of it....WELCOME TO PASSIONS hope you have fun here okaie that was an awesome first post!!!! sorry for the interrogation:P thats me i guess but look fwd to me reading more poetry by you and replying with my meen mind:P haha jk but well.....good first post again:P
best of luck
hunnie*

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