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Im Only A Statistic

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Tempest
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dont eat paint chips!!!!


0 posted 08-21-2006 04:14 PM       View Profile for Tempest   Email Tempest   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tempest

what am i to you
would you give me a second look
or am i just a statistic
something to put in a book

for every insipid moment
that passes us bye
i know im just a number
on this infinate slide

round and round
till we all fall down
lost in the moment
of beautiful sound

statistics, statistics
thats all we are
statistics, statistics
this is only the start


[This message has been edited by Tempest (08-21-2006 07:59 PM).]

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Tempest
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dont eat paint chips!!!!


1 posted 08-21-2006 04:17 PM       View Profile for Tempest   Email Tempest   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tempest

this ones a tounge twister all right but please know that i wrote this about our future because by the time were old enough to have kids, our parents generation have already gone and screwed it up for us
                            ~Tempest~


                P.S. The war on terror sucks
mgoodman1989
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2 posted 08-21-2006 04:36 PM       View Profile for mgoodman1989   Email mgoodman1989   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mgoodman1989

Tempest,

How exciting, being the first to comment I mean. Uhmmm... I really like this. It's true, we're all statistics.

I like the way you write. You say the truth in a way we can all understand.

And, I agree, the war on terror does suck. Big time. Just another example of how generations before us screwed things up.

Much Love,

Michelle
Tempest
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dont eat paint chips!!!!


3 posted 08-21-2006 06:28 PM       View Profile for Tempest   Email Tempest   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tempest

thats cool that you like my work
                  much love,
                         Tempest
hunnie_girl
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4 posted 08-29-2006 12:27 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

wow i was just browsing through the poems and this caught my eye and wow i really liked it but when you put it like that... i don't want to have such a world but i can't live on dreams forever haha i love your poems so much they all make perfect sense to me...so never stop writing
thanks for sharing yet another great poem...
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

*Alli4000*
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5 posted 09-03-2006 07:58 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

"round and round
till we all fall down
lost in the moment
of beautiful sound


I really liked that stanza!  Overall, the poem was excellent, I really enjoy your writings.

~Alli~
stil_watrs_run_deep
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missouri


6 posted 01-05-2008 02:50 AM       View Profile for stil_watrs_run_deep   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stil_watrs_run_deep

WOW
thats all i can get out..
i love how in so few words you expressed so much..

i love it!

smiles are universal :]

 
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