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gozaggss
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0 posted 08-21-2006 01:25 AM       View Profile for gozaggss   Email gozaggss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gozaggss

not exactly poetry. just the mutterings of an
ill-used and illusioned mind


What happens to time already gone? Does it go into the future to be re-used again? Like water down a drain is it cleaned and then reused? Or is it like a tissue paper? Used once, and then gone forever. Is it possible to recycle used time like a water bottle, or like chewing gum, do you need to buy more? Can you take it from the trash? Or does it sift through your fingers like the proverbial sands? Can you hold it in your hand for as long as you want? Does time heal or harm over itself? Can time mend a broken bone or heart? Can it give answers or make peace? Can time mow a lawn or fix a copy machine? Or is it just a useless slob, unemployed and unloved on a bean-bag chair? Can time be a friend? Or is it a nemesis you do battle with? Is it kindhearted and good-natured or a cruel and loveless beast? Does it fester or does it glow? Can time be stopped? Can you pause it in any moment? Can time freeze, and let you live in perfect harmony forever and after?
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mgoodman1989
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1 posted 08-21-2006 05:27 PM       View Profile for mgoodman1989   Email mgoodman1989   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mgoodman1989

Different, I like it. Keep writing.

Much love,
Michelle
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2 posted 08-21-2006 11:32 PM       View Profile for the_girl_next_door   Email the_girl_next_door   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_girl_next_door

wow.. i love writing like this.. I sometimes like to write stuff like this.. the unexplained type deal..

Great job..

keep it up
~heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

stargal
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3 posted 08-22-2006 01:05 AM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

WoW! Waaay different, I might think like this all the time but I must admit I've never tried writing it down. I always thought it was useless trash that my brain was melting down on, now I see that I'm wrong. It shows you in the questions you ask and stuffs. I liked this one.

Thanks for sharing, I learned something really neat

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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