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my footsteps died out forever

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gozaggss
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0 posted 08-21-2006 01:23 AM       View Profile for gozaggss   Email gozaggss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gozaggss

My Footsteps died out forever
I’m only on the next step
I can’t make an imprint
My life quickly wasted
No one feels and impact
My earthquakes are unnoticed
Like L.A. no one seems to care
About the people the disaster the stories
Like of John Doe
Who? I have no idea.
Never heard of him. Someone important?
Pointed mine, no one listens anymore
History classes are extra
So how are we going to learn from mistakes like mine?

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mgoodman1989
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1 posted 08-21-2006 05:29 PM       View Profile for mgoodman1989   Email mgoodman1989   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mgoodman1989

VERY good write. I haven't read much of your stuff, but your good.. Keep it up!

Much Love,
Michelle
stargal
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2 posted 08-22-2006 01:26 AM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

I loved this!! It has a great lesson to it also, cause, like, you're right, no one really pays attention to stuffs like that anymore.

Thanks for the lovely reminder, I know that I will start thinking more about the past events

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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gozaggss
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3 posted 08-22-2006 01:54 AM       View Profile for gozaggss   Email gozaggss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gozaggss

thx. this one is one of my favorits for those reasons
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