my footsteps died out forever

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Teen Poetry #7

my footsteps died out forever

gozaggss
Junior Member

since 2006-04-26

Posts 33

0 posted 2006-08-21 01:23 AM

My Footsteps died out forever
I’m only on the next step
I can’t make an imprint
My life quickly wasted
No one feels and impact
My earthquakes are unnoticed
Like L.A. no one seems to care
About the people the disaster the stories
Like of John Doe
Who? I have no idea.
Never heard of him. Someone important?
Pointed mine, no one listens anymore
History classes are extra
So how are we going to learn from mistakes like mine?

mgoodman1989
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 93
Iowa, USA

1 posted 2006-08-21 05:29 PM

VERY good write. I haven't read much of your stuff, but your good.. Keep it up!

Much Love,
Michelle

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-08-22 01:26 AM

I loved this!! It has a great lesson to it also, cause, like, you're right, no one really pays attention to stuffs like that anymore.

Thanks for the lovely reminder, I know that I will start thinking more about the past events

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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gozaggss
Junior Member

since 2006-04-26

Posts 33

3 posted 2006-08-22 01:54 AM

thx. this one is one of my favorits for those reasons

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