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Shantia Moss
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0 posted 08-20-2006 09:34 PM       View Profile for Shantia Moss   Email Shantia Moss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shantia Moss

I wish I were what you wanted out of life
A care giver, lover, friend and wife
I wish I could be there to help carry your load
Let you know you’re not alone and that
my shoulders have room for whatever you want me to hold
I wish I could be the friend you call to when you’re feeling down
I wish I could be the one who you needed to always be around
I wish we could talk about serious things and silly things while holding hands and relaxing on a swing
I wish you would whisper very close to my ear the deepest feelings you have for me
I wish that when you look at me in your eyes I would see respect, love and want
I wish I could come see you whatever time I want
I wish that you could see that you are my world
The chocolate in the middle of my vanilla swirl
In my life is where you belong I hope me thinking like this isn’t wrong
You’re the root to my tree, the stars in my sky
The first guy to make me feel special and not want to cry
You make me feel beautiful and sweet
So I know what’s going to be up when our bodies meet
You see we have our own song that our bodies will groove to
Time will stop and there will be only us two
Our souls will fuse together and ultimately become one
And at this point I will no loner WANT to run
But settle down in you and let myself be free
Even though it may not be for eternity
You see we have very separate lives and to each his own is what we know
But after meeting you, knowing, touching, and holding you
My soul will never again be alone
My life for that matter will never again be the same
You were my match
My strengths where I was weak
The reason I smiled, laughed or even speak
And if we never meet again and this is truly the end
You    changed      my      life
I wish we could be what we need for each other with out holding back
I wish you could look past the obvious and let your self be free
To explore all the things that you want with me
I wish you were as ready as I
But I guess I shall live in want as I see you pass by
Its like wild stars seeking midnight’s sun with the passing of something real as the morning comes
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1 posted 08-21-2006 06:50 AM       View Profile for Tempest   Email Tempest   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tempest

its like wild stars seeding midnight's sun with the passing of something real as the morning comes

This was my favorite part.
               ~Tempest~
cherrys_rule
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2 posted 08-21-2006 06:52 PM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrys_rule

I thought this was very long but very good I hope to see more from you in the future, and thanks for sharing.
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3 posted 08-21-2006 07:40 PM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

"You see we have very separate lives and to each his own is what we know
But after meeting you, knowing, touching, and holding you
My soul will never again be alone"


Very beautiful poem Shantia Moss! I loved the imagery in this, the descriptions you have are amazing.

Thanks for sharing!

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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