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the extention of my will is my friend

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gozaggss
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0 posted 08-20-2006 12:44 AM       View Profile for gozaggss   Email gozaggss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gozaggss

i dont remember if i've posted this or not.. so eh

Iíve shaken the witness
My life is 100% truthless
I have them eating from my trembling, callused palm
They look up, wipe their mouths, they look at me calm
Believed everything I said, I think
My wordís a faucet, their mindís a sink
They return later to continue the feast
Like carrion crows, theyíre all just ravenous beasts
They donít care whether itís alive or if itís dead
They just eat eat eat until all has been said
On my behalf, I think Iíve run out of lies
To tell the crows, my friends, Iím all out of sighs
To use and pause as I think of a solution
To questions that I made too full of pollution
Contaminated with my lies they look nearly pristine
Except for that little chip in the glass at the edge of the screen
Thatís where I hide my lies, the truth is finally out
I give up. To the roof I do shout
Iím a liar, a thief and not a great kin
A politician, a senator, an Emperor, and sin
Itís a tragedy that I should have met you
I ruin lives, not save them, I am the anti-glue
That breaks people apart, not brings them together
You thought I saved a relationship. I did it as a personal endeavor
To test my power over the race of mankind
To alter people, to control them, and all with my mind
I am not the good-hearted, savior that you have proclaimed
Iím just a dictator, a cruel ruler, which I myself ordained
Crowned myself as the ruler of you all
You were an extension of my will; a servant always on call
I used you like the hunter used his spear
To kill you before you kill me, and simply out of fear
Were you even ever going to kill me?
Iím not too sure. I canít really see
Maybe you werenít my enemy after all
I betrayed you anyways; the epicenter of my fall
I made a mistake, I wonít do so again. Look! My torso does bend
My nose to the floor in apology; can you once again be my friend?

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cherrys_rule
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1 posted 08-20-2006 04:53 PM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrys_rule

I thought this was very good. I always enjoy your writings/poems. i hope to seee more in the future.
stargal
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2 posted 08-20-2006 06:06 PM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

Hi gozaggss,

I think you have posted this but let me just say that I love this poem as much now as I did than! I think you did a more than excellent job on it.

Thanks for sharing this with us, again, I appreciated the reminder of it

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
ĖSocrates
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gozaggss
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3 posted 08-20-2006 07:13 PM       View Profile for gozaggss   Email gozaggss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gozaggss

whoopsies.. yeah i thought i did... oh well
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