"I cant tell you how to live your life
But I can offer a helping hand
Can you see it in front of you
I will help you stand"
One of my favorite parts^^
For me this poem is really sad to read. I've known people like this, all over the world, it doesn't change. You have one person like this in SF or one person like this in China, it's a non-stop horror to see. Wow... I'm just chattering on, this is not what I meant to talk about. lol
What I meant to say is I felt you did a wonderful job with this poem. I like how you kind on incorporate an "uplifting" side to your poems. You always have such good things to say in them...
Thanks for sharing, I know my comment doesn't make much sense and I'm sorry for that...
"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."