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Take Me As I Am

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hunnie_girl
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bleach blonde hair,
is that all you take me for,
a cute perky smile,
of glimmering galore,

but theres more to me,
than you might think,
than bright wondering eyes,
and ribbons and pink,

underneath all this,
there's a heart with care,
and adventurous mind,
who doesn't fuss over her hair,

you might think i'm scared,
to hurt other peoples feelings,
but i'll tell you now,
i don't get mad i get down right even,

if i changed my look,
would you change your mind?
because i'll do that now,
and leave my world behind,

dyed brown curls,
is that my new look?
a devious smile,
you can't read like an open book,

maybe you should have left me,
strong-willed and bright,
but it's over now,
too late for you to know i was right.

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

© Copyright 2006 Krysti - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-19-2006 09:44 PM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrys_rule

I like this one it kindda reminds me of my friend. But you shouldn't change for anyone. If that person doesn't like you for you, then you shouldn't like them at all.
Sorry I just had to go through the same discussion with the same friend I metioned earlier. I hope you make the up your mind though.Other than that I really liked this poem it had a nice plot to it. I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing. i'm gonna put this poem in my libary.
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2 posted 08-20-2006 01:26 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

thanx i'm not gonna change for someone else because even though people don't like the way i might look or act i like my personality an dso do my friends so i don't have to change for anyone but me thanx.
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

broken_smile1469
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3 posted 08-20-2006 01:53 AM       View Profile for broken_smile1469   Email broken_smile1469   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for broken_smile1469

i really liked this poem. i can relate to it too... it also reminds me of a friend of mine... well anyways Great Job!!!
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I loved this poem! It's the rebellion in it that attracts me to it.
Wonderful job with this poem I hope to see more like it

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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stil_watrs_run_deep
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5 posted 01-05-2008 02:37 AM       View Profile for stil_watrs_run_deep   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stil_watrs_run_deep

That was so inspirational..

im glad that you are taking a stand and not being like everyone else.. and really appriciate being your own person.
not many people can do that..
thank you!

smiles are universal :]

 
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