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mgoodman1989
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since 03-05-2006
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Iowa, USA


0 posted 08-19-2006 02:29 PM       View Profile for mgoodman1989   Email mgoodman1989   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mgoodman1989

Not really a poem... I guess... everyone at one point or another will look back and say, why did I do that? What was I thinking? Well, I have changed a lot. I've become someone that I'm not necesarrily proud of.


Who are you?
Where did you come from?
Stop posing as the girl
my parents think is me
I don't like you
so just leave me alone
Your rotten, negetive attitude
has no place here
teenage hormones
GET OUT! Leave my body!
My heart, my soul!
Your ruining everything
An awful wave of anger
has flooded over me
drowning the girl
I used to be
standing before the mirror
I can see what has to be done
Using the blade I hold in my hand
I shall set the 'old' me free!

© Copyright 2006 Michelle Elizabeth Goodman - All Rights Reserved
rhia_5779
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since 06-09-2006
Posts 1304
California


1 posted 08-19-2006 02:55 PM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rhia_5779

it sounds that this is more venting than any thing else. but you did get your message across very clearly
cherrys_rule
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since 03-18-2006
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2 posted 08-20-2006 03:22 PM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrys_rule

yeah I have to agree... But don't cut yourself that's never the answer. I would know, I went down that path before and It got me nowhere i wanted to be. i just hope you don't make the same dession that i did.
But other then that I thought this was a good poem, you had some rhymes to it so I think you can call it a poem. But what ever.
stargal
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since 03-06-2006
Posts 1350
OR USA


3 posted 08-20-2006 06:12 PM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

I agree with everything said above^^

Venting can be a good thing though, in fact vent instead of cutting! It sometimes just helps to get all those emotions out before you explode...

I know that I havenít seen you on here in awhile so I just want to remind you that everyone here on pip is more than happy to listen if you ever need someone to hear. I hope that things improve for you in the future and I know that you have taken the first step by admitting you donít like your life at the moment. You just need to take another and another until you arrive at the point where you feel complete again, with Godís grace that will be sooner rather than later.

Good luck and God bless!

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
ĖSocrates
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mgoodman1989
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since 03-05-2006
Posts 93
Iowa, USA


4 posted 08-20-2006 07:06 PM       View Profile for mgoodman1989   Email mgoodman1989   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mgoodman1989

Apparently I give off the wrong impression. A very strong wrong impression. I'm sorry for any confusion, but I do not now, nor have I ever cut myself. Life stinks, but I'll get over it.

Thanks for reading.

Love much,
Michelle
toriber
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since 06-10-2010
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texas


5 posted 06-10-2010 01:17 PM       View Profile for toriber   Email toriber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for toriber

i totaly love this one!!
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