I'm afraid that I must agree with everything said above^^
Yet, even though it did repeat itself, I found that I liked the poem a lot when I ignored the repetitiveness. I think it's a great general idea that just needs a little more polish to it, no offence.
I loved the "shy" part, it's something I can relate too, by far that would be my favorite part...
Thanks for sharing
"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."