Thought I'd ask you about a few things...
"to teach yourself and to learn to forgive
Lets the other have a chance to really live"
Is this supposed to be "let (no S) the other (S) have a chance to really live? Because when I read it the way that it is it's a little confusing.
"to push it away and to try and forget
proves you are too scared, still yet"
Could you explain what the "still yet" means? I'm not sure I understood that...
I liked the general idea of the poem, to let grudges go and not be selfish. I think it's a marvelous lesson for all of us to learn. I thank you for the reminder that is what I need to be doing^^
Plus, I think you should add on. I think you could make this longer without being horrible, just a thought though...
Thanks for sharing/listening
"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."