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My Angel

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broken_smile1469
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0 posted 08-19-2006 02:05 AM       View Profile for broken_smile1469   Email broken_smile1469   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for broken_smile1469



As the eyes of an angel
Stare at me with devotion
And all in an instant
I am lost in the notion
Of you being mine

As the lips of an angel
Come closer to me
I stand there in silence
I now understand you hold the key
To my heart, to my happiness

As of now you are my angel
My love will never end
I know you will protect me
You also are my best friend
A soul that could not be replaced

You will always be my angel
As you call out my name
Knowing I’ll be there to save you
And I needed you, you came
Together, though joy and through pain

As the eyes of an angel
Still stare back at me
I know now and forever
That you will always be
My angel
© Copyright 2006 Miranda Nelson - All Rights Reserved
cherrys_rule
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1 posted 08-19-2006 08:09 AM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrys_rule

awww that's so cute...and nice. I would pick out the parts that I like but the whole poem I liked. So very good job I liked it alot.
tapper798
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2 posted 08-20-2006 02:12 PM       View Profile for tapper798   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tapper798

I think I wrote a poem titled this. :]

I liked yours much better than my own. lol keep it up.

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I just want to find my way back to you...where love is strong and feels brand new.

stargal
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3 posted 08-21-2006 05:54 PM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

A very beautiful and sweet poem! I liked it a bunch. It was a pleasurable poem to read, instead of being dark and gloomy it was kind of "uplifting" to read, made me smile!

Thanks for sharing

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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broken_smile1469
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4 posted 08-22-2006 03:04 PM       View Profile for broken_smile1469   Email broken_smile1469   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for broken_smile1469

thanks for the commments!
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5 posted 09-04-2006 11:05 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

Delightful poem...just beautiful.
Keep posting!

~Alli~
 
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