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Why do I still Care?

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Abiola
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since 08-09-2006
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0 posted 08-19-2006 01:43 AM       View Profile for Abiola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Abiola


How is it that you are always on my mind

Even when i try to look the other way?

How is it that after all that has happen i still wanna cry,

smile, and love u

Though i still want u out of my life?

Why do i still pretend i don't have feelings for u

When u and i both know i care about u deeply?

Why does my heart keep pushing me backwards to you

When I want to move forward?

Is this a sign because I always see you

And you are in my heart?

People may say what's wrong with you, why do you still

talk to him after all that has happen?

Am i to say?

I guess i want us to start over

Or maybe i'm just stupid and making a mistake all

over again

I don't know what's going on but i know i'm so caught

up with you in my life

I wanna make this right but i don't know what to do

Honestly i see me with you but then again i can't and

won't let it happen...

I can't believe i'm thinking about u right now

Your touch, your smell, your smile, your kiss

Just every thing about you

How do i make this right?

How do i let all of this pass by?

How do i move on or am i?

How do i stop thinking about u or am i suppose to?

I just wanna know how all of this should end!!!
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stargal
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since 03-06-2006
Posts 1350
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1 posted 08-19-2006 07:50 PM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

Hi Abiola,

Great poem! I think this one is my favorite out of anything I've seen you write so far, just because I can relate better to this one than the others...

"Why does my heart keep pushing me backwards to you
When I want to move forward?
Is this a sign because I always see you
And you are in my heart?"


My favorite part^^ The pushing backwards when you want to move forwards is a neat way of phrasing this part of the poem. I thought you did an excellent job with that...

Thanks for sharing!

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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tapper798
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since 07-20-2003
Posts 352
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2 posted 08-20-2006 02:11 PM       View Profile for tapper798   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tapper798

"Why does my heart keep pushing me backwards to you,
When I want to move forward?"


I loved that part. This poem hit a soft spot for me cause everything you described I'm going through right now. Sometimes it's hard to let go of someone, esp for me it is when I don't know if they'll hold on anyways. But yeah, I think that's the reason I liked this, it was extremely honest as to something I can totally relate to. You did an amazing job capturing that.

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I just want to find my way back to you...where love is strong and feels brand new.

Midnight_Daze
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since 01-08-2007
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3 posted 01-08-2007 04:23 PM       View Profile for Midnight_Daze   Email Midnight_Daze   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Midnight_Daze

This is exactly how i felt/ feel with my ex. It hit home. Great job
STOP_JUDGiiN_M3
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since 02-07-2007
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4 posted 02-07-2007 01:53 PM       View Profile for STOP_JUDGiiN_M3   Email STOP_JUDGiiN_M3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for STOP_JUDGiiN_M3

HEY THIS IS HOW I FEEL EVERYDAY. I DIDN'T HAVE A FAVORITE STANZA CAUSE THEY ALL WERE SO DIFFERENT BUT UNIQUE. THANKS FOR SHARING...

 
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