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Silly little poem
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Silly little poem |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533
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i walk to the kitchen Anticipating what i might find I open up the cupboards and see nothin that satisfies my eyes I look in the fride and what do i see? Behold! Oreo pudding sits beckoning me! I look to my left, I look to my right Gotta make sure theres no one in sight I take out the pudding and put it on the table To make this creation, i might not be able! I go back to the cupboards and take out a cone I'm so thankful i'm making this alone! I take the cone, grab a spoon, and aproach my pudding I open it up, smile then begin all my spooning. I Make a cone filled with this creamy good sweet But i want to make it interesting, its gotta look neat I go to the frige and grab a bottle of whipped topping Now that i'm started you best believe theres no stopping I spray and spray until it looks good enough to eat I'm so excited to have made this wonderful treat Now as I make the walk back to my room I look to the kitchen and say "don't worry, i'll be back soon" Hahaha told ya stargal! I'm all about makin poems about my food : ) |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
LOL!! I loved this one bekah!! It was like what I was expecting yet it was so unexpected! It was simply awesome. I loved the story form  BTW!~ I'm gracing you with my 800th post, you should feel honored!~  lolGreat job with this one but next time write about the WAFFLES!  "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
okay! will do! haha thanks i feel soooooo honored. OMG EVERYONE STOP WHAT YOU'RE DOING!!!! I'M STARGALS 800th POST!!!! WOOT WOOT!!! |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
I actually like this one better then the waffles. If my brother liked reading about food poetry he would love your poems. I thought personally they are very good. Also congrads on the 800th post stargal!!! |
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