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silentmage13
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since 2005-11-20
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0 posted 2006-08-15 07:32 PM


Fluttering closed from a long, hard day
My eyes rest, carrying me to my dreams-
The dreams full of ambition and hope
In a world where only few know my name
Where I can stand tall and be free to say:

"I am the only voice of my own destiny.
It is my mind that shall recall my past.
My heart will beat in accord to my desires.
Each day can be visible as I live the the same.
No longer from my demons can I suffer to flee."

Dawn lights the dim room as I must wake,
Yet with a stronger resolve do I start the day.
With a dream I can alter into truth, into reality,
I shall know myself, without desiring earthly fame.
Only that which I earn each day will I take.

Now I will face every moment without fear,
For the object of my fear no longer exists.
I am in charge of my future, with God's aid.
My deliverance, in the form of pain, has come.
I am free to chase ambition without a tear.

Hope can only be found inside yourself, never in a person or thing.

© Copyright 2006 Alisha Olsen - All Rights Reserved
broken_smile1469
Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104

1 posted 2006-08-17 12:47 PM


hey i really liked this poem! it was hard to understand in some parts but thats probably just me. well Great Job! hope to see more by you
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