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Tears |
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silentmage13 Junior Member
since 2005-11-20
Posts 14Florida |
Tears of the mother who realizes what she's lost. Tears of the father who sees his girl fight. Tears of the daughter who endures the pain. Tears of the sister watching a family fall apart. Tears of the boyfriend knowing he can do nothing. Tears of the uncle hating the decisions made. Tears of God watching his creation destroy itself. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
This is really sad, the implications of the wording release many emotions into the poem. It doesn't tell you what is going on exactly; yet, it does imply things, which make this a very interesting read. For, in not saying straight out, it allows the reader to decide what he/she wants too. Excellent job, it stretches our imaginations in interesting ways… I, also, like how this is kind of short, yet, in being short it says a whole lot that you would miss in a longer poem, because now you have to study every word and take it to a deeper level… Great job in writing this, I really, really, enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing!  "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow i really liked this it is good but.....sooooo sad anyways hope to read more from you soon... Krysti* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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