"If only they could truly see,
That it's you who sets me free.
If only they could truly know,
It's thoughts of you that let me hope-
Hope for a brand new sweet day
Where I can live life my own way"
Wow!! This part was my favorite in the whole poem! Yet, believe me, it took me forever to choose a favorite part, the whole poem is just amazing!
The ending with the question wasn't what I thought was going to happen, it was nice though, kind of put a little twist on the whole thing. Great job with this poem, it is a pleasurable read... Thanks for sharing!
"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."