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Teen Poetry #7

Her Life At A Glace

Foreverone8783
Junior Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 24
Illinios

0 posted 2006-08-12 02:57 PM

Lying eyes
Broken hearts
It's what she's been used to
From the start

Shattered dreams
Endless tears
It's what has happened
Through the years

Fake smiles
Endless lies
It's what she'll live with
Until the day she dies

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2006-08-12 03:41 PM

this poem made a lot of sense i really liked the flow too...i'll look for more of your work.
Krysti*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-08-14 12:40 PM

Well, I'm not sure I understood all of this poem, but what I did understand, or thought I understood, I liked. I think this is one of those poems where you have to look beneath the surface to understand all of it. Yet, you still might not be able to understand any of it, it's how you interpret it...

The middle stanza, I thought, was awesome! I loved the flow to it; the rhythm you get when you read this is superb. Thanks a bunch for sharing!

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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Fuschia
Junior Member

since 2006-06-19

Posts 35
England

3 posted 2006-08-16 03:03 PM

This poem was very good. Sad though. It flowed really well. I look forward to reading your other poems.

xxFushiaxx

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