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Dont Ever Say Never

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Tempest
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0 posted 08-11-2006 10:43 PM       View Profile for Tempest   Email Tempest   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tempest

From the present I can see all my mistakes
The perfect way to avoid them keeps playing in my head
And in the present, in the way im thinking now
That we could have avoided all we said

Would it have been too hard
Could you have spared me the pain
You could have let me know
Instead you left me with a stain

A stain of all my hopes
Of all my fears
A stain of all my dreams
Of all my tears

It wont come out
Its there for forever
Its a constant reminder
To never say never
Dont ever say never
© Copyright 2006 Bryan Girton - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-11-2006 10:57 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

It wont come out
Its there for forever
Its a constant reminder
To never say never

good ending... I can relate to this poem...i thought it was nicely written...
Krysti*

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Midnight_Daze
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2 posted 01-08-2007 04:36 PM       View Profile for Midnight_Daze   Email Midnight_Daze   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Midnight_Daze

Tempest. I really love your poetry. I'm not sure why but i really really like it. I loved your ending most.  Please keep writing.

~Sami~
surf_painter
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3 posted 04-10-2007 08:46 PM       View Profile for surf_painter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for surf_painter

wow i liked this poem alot its very well written and i can't wait to hear more from you
~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~
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4 posted 01-14-2011 08:41 PM       View Profile for ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~   Email ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~

I love your ending its amazing GREAT JOB

~XxExpect Nothing N You'll Never Get HurtxX~

 
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