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Teen Poetry #7

Dont Ever Say Never

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

0 posted 2006-08-11 10:43 PM

From the present I can see all my mistakes
The perfect way to avoid them keeps playing in my head
And in the present, in the way im thinking now
That we could have avoided all we said

Would it have been too hard
Could you have spared me the pain
You could have let me know
Instead you left me with a stain

A stain of all my hopes
Of all my fears
A stain of all my dreams
Of all my tears

It wont come out
Its there for forever
Its a constant reminder
To never say never
Dont ever say never

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2006-08-11 10:57 PM

It wont come out
Its there for forever
Its a constant reminder
To never say never

good ending... I can relate to this poem...i thought it was nicely written...
Krysti*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

Midnight_Daze
New Member

since 2007-01-08

Posts 2

2 posted 2007-01-08 04:36 PM

Tempest. I really love your poetry. I'm not sure why but i really really like it. I loved your ending most. Please keep writing.

~Sami~

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

3 posted 2007-04-10 08:46 PM

wow i liked this poem alot its very well written and i can't wait to hear more from you

~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~
Junior Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 15
Alabama, United States

4 posted 2011-01-14 08:41 PM

I love your ending its amazing GREAT JOB

~XxExpect Nothing N You'll Never Get HurtxX~

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