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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
What a good life I have, when everybody ignores and doesn't understand me. What can I do to make them see? I can be what they want me to be. Oh wait... No I won't change because of you. I'm still gonna go through. I might be going the wrong way, but what can you say? NOTHING! That's what I thought. I hope you Wrought in hell! Or in a gruesome,horrible,nightmare cell! I knew what were your future plans. But sorry girlie, you ruined it, because now I have your man! So say good-bye to your life! For once I get to be happy. And for you, well...you can be in my shoes and be oh so crappy! Hello New Life, Good-bye future EX-WIFE! |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
this poem is about a girl that ran out on her b/f and I just took her place, so then she got mad, even though them two had broken up. We weren't friends at all either. So yeah... tell me what you think about muah poem. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
i liked it....some parts were a little hard to understand but it has a good meaning....i hope everything works out for you.... Krysti* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
WOW! such...emotion. lol eternal condemnation in hell is probably not a healthy wish for someone to endure... haha good poem...really. i did enjory reading this. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
LOL! I loved this poem! Sorry, it just made me laugh reading the ending and stuff... I loved how it started out kind of sarcastic though, because, knowing me, I'm a very sarcastic person at times. I love seeing that in other people, it's a little reminder I'm not alone... I thought that it was a cute idea with the contradictions going back and foreth. Yet, I would agree with bekah that wanting someone to rot in hell is taking it maybe a tad bit too far, but what do I know... Thanks for sharing this one  "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
yeah I guess you're right, but when this had happened I was in a ticked off mood. I wasn't trying to make this a funny poem or anything, but I'm glad that you enjoyed it though. Oh and I don't wish for her to rot in hell, but I... I guess I shouldn't off used those words at all. But I did. |
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