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cherrys_rule
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0 posted 2006-08-10 06:18 PM



You cheated on me.
What more can I say.
Yeah we had fun and all,
and you always got your way.
But what am I suppose to do,
when you go out and have fun, cause you had some booze?
The next day I find out that you went and had sex with your old girlfriend.
One of my good friends that gave me a hand,
the times you couldn't mend!
I don't care.
I'm not listening, not anymore!
The more I learn the more I ignore!
I have a few more words to say, good-bye, have a wonderful life, and and have a nice day.


I'm dedicating this poem to My ex-Joey.
I don't really have to explain why we   broke up, b/c I think you would know the reason from reading this. But he just made me really mad. so... yeah! Hope you like it or not, w/e I just need everybody to know what I felt when I was writing this.

[This message has been edited by cherrys_rule (08-11-2006 04:20 PM).]

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1 posted 2006-08-11 04:54 PM


i'm sorry for what he did to you....i hope you feel better soon.... it was good and i felt what you felt through your poem.
thanks for sharing...
Krysti*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

cherrys_rule
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2 posted 2006-08-11 08:33 PM


Thanks, i found out when I broke up with him he decided to go on the wrong path and tried to kill himself b/c I wouldn't take him back. So he ended up in Rehab. He just got out about a week ago... and tried to do the same thing again cuz of me. But I was just really sick of it so I just wrote the poem on him. Now everybody is blaming me and saying that I should take him back, which I'm not so what ever. And thanks for commenting on this one.

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