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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2006-08-09 01:59 AM


try losing your best friend,
and you might just feel my pain,
try messing with lost trust again and again,
and you might understand me,
try fighting for what you belive is right,
and you might hear the truth in my heart,
then try looking in at my life,
and wonder how i can remain so calm,
and i'll try for one more day.

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

© Copyright 2006 Krysti - All Rights Reserved
the_girl_next_door
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1 posted 2006-08-09 03:10 AM


Wow.. this was short but i really liked it.. I like the last line.. it pulled it all together. Great job..

~Heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

Sad_In_Havok712
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2 posted 2006-08-09 03:10 PM


you should go to my poem emotional bullet on the open poetry #38
Digital_Hell
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Amidst black roses
3 posted 2006-08-09 05:46 PM


I really like this. I could relate very well, ive felt exactly that way! Ill be on the lookout for more of your work

A sign in  the wind
The fatal last breath
Soft prelude to death
Alone
Amidst black roses

hunnie_girl
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4 posted 2006-08-09 06:52 PM


thanx i liked this poem of all mine the best b/c it was more feelings than rhyming
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

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