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droppinginsideout Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 54TENN |
I hope that now I’m not too far-gone The world keeps slippin and I can’t hold on How fast does the stuff move? And why is it I can never find my groove? I don’t think this world is likin me I guess here in a few we’ll find out and see. I feel my future’s my past and my present isn’t pleasant, So don’t expect me to do to anything miraculous on this planet. The worlds not ready for what I have in store I just hope its what you’ve both been waitin for. Now in my battle for this grip, Its like I just have fingertips on the lip Of the buildin block of life Which brings joy yet brings strife. I can feel ur hands supporting some weight But you need to let go before it’s too late. Cuz I know that without you I could do so much Ive just waited too long and now I have to rush. The spinnin keeps occurring and the worst is yet to come But the thought of the next step just makes my body numb. So as I’m the one worryin you guys just hold tight Cuz dad u know u taught me to never give up the fight. It’s just the fight keeps getting worse and it gets hard to breathe But I wont give up cuz you know its not me . so please let this be your final guide on knowing how to let my slips slide. I love you two dearly and with all my heart And know that in resurrecting my life ill do my part |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hi droppinginsideout, I haven't seen you on here before so let me send you our warmest welcomes to pip! I hope you like the site, I know that I have... Awesome poem btw! I loved this part a lot, "Now in my battle for this grip, Its like I just have fingertips on the lip Of the buildin block of life Which brings joy yet brings strife. I can feel ur hands supporting some weight But you need to let go before it’s too late" It's my favorite in the whole poem. Although, it was rather hard to choose a favorite, I admit, but this stanza seemed to jump off the screen at me... This was a very enjoyable read for me, thanks a bunch for sharing  "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I don’t think this world is likin me I guess here in a few we’ll find out and see. hmmmm that i can relate to good write...... Krysti* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
I loved this poem you did a wonderful job on this. i hope to see more on here in the future. ~Courtney~ [This message has been edited by cherrys_rule (08-11-2006 08:34 PM).] |
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