it's something i just can't explain.

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electricxheart
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

0 posted 2006-07-23 10:46 PM

i wish i could make you sit still
"for me, only for me"
please, you know how much i regret
not saying those things i need to say
caught within my throat for another day
dont leave now, i have faith
i have faith against my fingertips
close enough to touch
living within us
and the future looks so bright
dimmed by the stars in your eyes
and when you look my way
it's too real, so real
i want to hold onto those moments
lie within the comfort your arms bring
and whisk myself away from this world
forget that love like this takes years to grow
forget that imperfections always
always
always
show
in the worst times, the times where
we are so young, so young at heart
these moments i know that i would
never want to part
away from your side,
breaking everything in stride
i’m breaking
i’m breathing
without you here
please, you know how much i regret
not saying those things i need to say
caught within my throat for another day
dont leave now, i have faith
i have faith against my fingertips
close enough to touch
living within us
and the future looks so bright
so bright tonight, so bright

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

1 posted 2006-07-23 11:17 PM

"please, you know how much i regret
not saying those things i need to say
caught within my throat for another day
dont leave now, i have faith
i have faith against my fingertips
close enough to touch"

Wow.. I loved this soooo much. I can relate, in a way, especially right now.. I'm going through something though it's not exactly like this.. I think I understand where you were coming from. This poem touches me deeply, it is full of emotion. Great job..

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

elisalie16
Member

since 2006-07-12

Posts 118
new jersey

2 posted 2006-07-23 11:51 PM

"for me, only for me"

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this line sort of confused me. i'm not sure. i guess i didn't see its tie into the rest of the poem. could you explain it?

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-07-24 02:21 AM

"forget that imperfections always
always
always
show
in the worst times, the times where
we are so young, so young at heart
these moments i know that i would
never want to part
away from your side,
breaking everything in stride
i’m breaking
i’m breathing
without you here"

Wow! This part of the poem was just... Wow! The whole poem was so amazing though, it's hard to choose what, i think, is the best. I liked the part Heather liked a lot also...

This is like one of my favorite poems of yours now, you can tell, at least I think you can, that a lot of time went into the making of this. IT was simply awesome!

Thanks a bunch for sharing

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oh_my_goshijustgotexcited
Member

since 2006-07-12

Posts 52
USA, IDAHO

4 posted 2006-07-26 01:22 AM

i loved this poem! amazing write! and i am not just saying that!
-later

Viola

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