"You pushed me to my death
Thank you so much for your care
You left me at the bottom
While I still gasped for air"
How sad... I loved this poem though! It is now one of my favorites by you... I thought it was very good, yet, i also didn't see the mystery, i must be very dense?
I liked how, in the stanza above, you "thanked" the person for pushing you over the edge. It was an interesting twist, ironic sarcasm... I loved that!
I also liked the ending in this poem a lot, it was a nice wrap up job to make it all fit together...
Thanks for sharing, this was an amazing write