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nikiah87
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since 2006-06-22
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Indiana

0 posted 2006-07-18 05:23 PM



My baby loves me just the way that I am.
He shows his love the best way that he can.

He holds me close when I can't sleep at night.
We'll always make up, right after the fight.

My baby loves me just the way that I am.
He knows it true, I'm his number one fan.

He kisses me, ever so light.
And he always tells me, "It'll be alright."

My baby loves me just the way that I am.
I can tell it in the way he holds my hand.

He's the sweetest thing, a dream come true.
My heart melts, when I think about you.

My baby loves me just the way that I am.
Through thick and thin, he's always my man.

~Ashlee

Let me know what ya think!

© Copyright 2006 Ashlee - All Rights Reserved
stargal
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since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
OR USA
1 posted 2006-07-19 09:26 AM


Hey nikiah87,

Welcome to piptalk! I hope you like the site, I know that I have...

Umm, awesome first post! No offence, but it sounds kind of familiar, like a song I've heard before? I don't know...

Hope to see more of you in the near future! Sorry, I haven't time to write more, work calls

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Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2006-07-21 11:40 AM


Ashlee~
WELCOME to PiP~

This is a nice piece~
Being a country music fan myself, it looks like Martina McBride wonderful hit song may have 'inspired' your poetic thoughs~
Hope to see more from you~

AGAIN ... Welcome to such a friendly circle of poetic friends~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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