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Frank W. Torres Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 133 |
Sunshine The morning came and I was feeling blue. Last night a friend of mine was returned to prison because of a lasp in communications. A cancer surviver who will now die a million deaths before the situation is rectify. A system wasting our tax dollars once again in a breath of nonsense. No skin off my back, let it roll once again. And then? And Then? The morning had me feeling blue. Sunshine came through my window and now the morning is a groove. Slap stick hand jive its time to move feeling the morning groove. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
It’s different, much more different than anything I have ever read and yet I liked it… It was unique in it’s own way. I especially liked the second stanza something about those words really stuck out to me… Sorry, I’m not very good at giving praise to things I like, I wish I was! I really did enjoy this poem though. I hope I will be able to see more of your poems in the near future  @-->--- |
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WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
I like this. It's very personal, I think, good job! Dance like nobody's watching, |
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Sweetie01 Junior Member
since 2006-05-15
Posts 28NJ, USA |
This is much different from others that i have read. I liked it a lot and I hope to hear more from you soon! ~*~Amanda~*~ |
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