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Teen Poetry #7

Happily. Ever. After

gozaggss
Junior Member

since 2006-04-26

Posts 33

0 posted 2006-06-16 09:24 PM

The School year is almost over
the sun lags low in the sky
And when i look at my friends one last time
I feel the urge to cry

the report cards have been mailed
mine are pretty bad
my friends are cleaning out their lockers
it makes me really sad

to say goodbye is really hard
im afraid i dont have the heart
sometimes i dont know the words to say
but i try to make it seem like art

a year ends, but another begins
the summer days are born
i'm going to really miss all my friends
the idea fills me with scorn

in no way do i like school
but it offers me one garauntee
that i get to see my friends everyday
and always in my time of need

farewell, sophomore year,
it's been... ehh.. alright...
the best part was when we all were together
that stuff was outta sight

our story's coming to an end
we all have our stages
but i'll write down all of our endevours
in this book of empty pages

time's almost up
the hourglass' been turned
i can't believe this school year's over
theres only one thing i learned

friends are the glue that binds me together
my life, my story, my soul, and my laughter
so here we come summer. are you ready for us?
last page is filled. Happily. ever. after.

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

1 posted 2006-06-16 10:38 PM

nice i did enjoy this. i really did. like...yeah.
some places it seemed a little forced but other than that I think it was done well.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

2 posted 2006-06-17 12:38 PM

I liked this alot. YOu have another on this same topic but I like this so much more. I liked th other one don't get me wrong.. but this one was awsome..

~heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

3 posted 2006-06-18 06:41 PM

MAN I CAN RELATE TO THIS!!! Plus I was A SOPHMORE. I really like this poem. So what school do you go to?

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