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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104
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i dont think this is one of my best poems... i just wrote it... but i hope ya'll like it! Like the clear lake Or a sea deep sea of blue Looking into your eyes There is nothing better Then being with you I’ve never felt this way About anyone else You are special to me In ways they all cant see I love you… the words I dare not say But alas we are friends And never will we be more But yet you hold the key That would unlock this door Of sorrow and pain that will not go away But my love cannot be shown They tell me to stay away I wish I could make it known That I will always love you More then words could ever say [This message has been edited by broken_smile1469 (07-13-2006 04:08 PM).] |
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oh_my_goshijustgotexcited Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 52USA, IDAHO |
but my love cannot be shown they tell me to stay away i wish i could make it known that was my favorite part! great poem! Viola |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104 |
Thank you! |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104 |
hey, does anyone have any idea on what the title of this could be? |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
"we are friends And never will we be more But yet you hold the key That would unlock this door Of sorrow and pain that will not go away" I loved this part, it's so sad. Yet it happens a lot that you love someone but you are just "Friends" with them. Ironic at times... Great write on this, i'm not sure about the title though, maybe locked? No, that's dumb... Umm, maybe someone else will have a better idea. Keep writing  @-->--- |
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