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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
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0 posted 2006-06-07 05:13 PM


Short I know but it just came to me. Hope you like it even though it's 6 lines.

Look deep
Look deep into me.
What do you see?
Deeper-into my eyes.
Do you despise?
Would you walk away or would you stay?

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stargal
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since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
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1 posted 2006-06-07 07:16 PM


Well, it's okay, it's not one of my favorites by you though... And it's not because it is short, but because it just isn't? lol... Sorry, I like the first part though, like the first 3 lines.

Thanks for posting again, it's been a long time no see

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