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girlskater117 Junior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 32 |
Why do people pick on me... Why don't they pushed in the sea... I don't know,but can't you see the mean thang... thats coming from me... They should go in a deep sleep... and never come back to see... the mean thang they done to me.... |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Okay, I’m afraid I’m not making much sense of any of your poems right now, I must be very dense today… This one I can understand a little bit better than the first, that is until you switch to “but can’t you see the mean thang that’s coming from me”, after that part you kind of lose me…. Once again, could you explain? @-->--- |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
yeah i don't really understand this one either, could you explain it for me/us. |
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