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Death Has Come |
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girlskater117 Junior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 32 |
Death is death... Life is life... Can't go on without the light... I can not hear... I can not see... I can not go through the willo tree... The time has end... Now I have to go... So This is the end of my show... |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
i dont really get it? sorry... |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
It rhymes? Are you trying to say that you can’t go on living without light in your life, so it’s time to give up and die? My feeling from this is that you wrote it just because it rhymed… no offence… I really don’t understand where this is coming from, could you explain? @-->--- |
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