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Teen Poetry #7

...not a thing...

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

0 posted 2006-06-07 11:11 AM

not a thing about the way
you make my heart melt
not a thing about the way
my knees go weak at your glance
not a single thing about it, makes sense

not a thing about how
your wink makes me okay
even when im crying on a sad, wet, rainy day..
and even when i want myself to hate you
as soon as you look at me i know
i love you and to my heart i'll be true.
not a one thing about it, makes sense

not a thing about how
you were the first one to give me butterflies
yet you're still
the only reason this girl cries
not a tiny thing about it, makes sense.

not a thing about the way
you're smile is the best
nothing about the way
my heart flies away
not a thing about it makes sense.

no, not ANYTHING about love makes sense!

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

1 posted 2006-06-07 11:25 AM

AMEN!
haha

i liked this alot!!!

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

2 posted 2006-06-07 11:33 AM

yeah, lol..haha, thanks!!=)

-missy

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

3 posted 2006-06-07 12:54 PM

awsome! i like it!!!

~L

poise_and_rationality
Junior Member

since 2006-05-06

Posts 46
my mind

4 posted 2006-06-07 12:58 PM

omg tahst all i can say lol t's really good

keep up the good work...

PAR

Give me attention
Give me envy
Give me malice
Give me a break!
Have some composure
And where is your posture?

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

5 posted 2006-06-08 05:25 PM

thanks y'all!

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