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Teen Poetry #7

why did you do it?

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

0 posted 2006-06-06 10:44 PM

What did u do it for?
Just cause you wanted more?

Why did you have to ruin my life?
Take something I couldn’t sacrifice?

What was going through your mind,
When you just had to get inside?

What were you thinking,
When I was just a weak link?

How could you do this to me?
How could you not see?

Where was your heart in this,
How could you wish,
To do this, to hurt me,
Even though you knew I couldn’t see?

I was too young to know,
I couldn’t tell, so it was so.
You’d ruin life for me,
When I was only three.

Where are you now, keeping that act?
Where is your wife, after packing her bags?
Your kids are with her,
And you don’t even remember
What you did to me,
And what I still see,
When I close my eyes,
And start to cry.

~L

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

1 posted 2006-06-06 10:54 PM

wow it was good. this kept me guessing as to what happened to her.
nice.

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

2 posted 2006-06-07 11:05 AM

happened to me too, great job putting it into words. was more than i could ever do.
nice poem...

xox
-missy

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