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xox.ice.cream.lover.xox
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since 2006-01-07
Posts 20
Canada

0 posted 2006-06-03 09:54 PM


Don't try to forget
If it's been engraved in your heart
Don't try to run away
If you can't stand to be apart

It might seem hard now
But never lose hope
There's always a light
Wherever you go

No goal's too high
You'll always find a way
No dream's too big
Tomorrow and today

And when it gets too dark
Move along, the stars are near
And just remember that
I'll forever be here

© Copyright 2006 Sabrina R. - All Rights Reserved
the_girl_next_door
Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591
USA
1 posted 2006-06-03 10:10 PM


Beautiful write.. I LOVED it.. it was very simple and emotional.. it was very inspirational.. showed someone that there is HOPE out there. great job.. I liked this very much.. keep up the good work..



~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

stargal
Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
OR USA
2 posted 2006-06-04 01:47 AM


Aww… This poem is something that I could give to many, many, people!
If only you could give the whole world hope like this… lol…

Great write, not much I can say, I loved this, I wouldn’t change anything, brilliant piece of work, untouchable

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