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Teen Poetry #7

But When the Night Comes

Foreverone8783
Junior Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 24
Illinios

0 posted 2006-06-03 03:22 PM

Staring out the window
As day turns into night
She has no strength left
For this endless fight

Throught the day she holds a fake smile
But on the inside she's falling apart
Even of you could get through to her
She wouldn't even know where to start

Her mind is a mess of unforgetable thought
Her heart is a mess of unforgetable pain
Nobody notices when she just pretends
So what good would showing her true feelings gain

She feels so alone in this cruel, cold world
Her only confort is when the night falls
Because in the night no one can see her
And she can let down all of her walls

She continues to fight so nobody knows
But her strength disappears with the sun
When the night comes she can no longer smile
When the night comes her tears just run

Staring out the window
As day turns into night
She has no strength left
For this endless fight

*^*Ashley*^*

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

1 posted 2006-06-03 05:29 PM

i LOVE LOVE LOVE this one! its again really sad, but YES, its really good...you started it with the ending, and wrapped it up perfectly! its amazing.

~L

Foreverone8783
Junior Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 24
Illinios

2 posted 2006-06-03 05:33 PM

Thanks!

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