I Really Don't Understand You

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Teen Poetry #7

I Really Don't Understand You

Sweetie01
Junior Member

since 2006-05-15

Posts 28
NJ, USA

0 posted 2006-05-29 09:33 PM

Why'd you tell her?
I'd really like to know

Did you think she'd see and tell me
And I'd put on a show?

I don't know why you even care
YOU left ME with a broken heart
Into which, for your enjoyment, you could stare

Do you still like me?
If you do, please tell me why.
Do you get enjoyment out of seeing me cry?

You are trying to pull me back to you
Where, into your arms
I will not fall

If you did this earlier
Maybe I'd come
But it is later
And your arms are the first place I run from

I do not like you anymore
So get it strait
That you and I will never again date!

~*~Amanda~*~

[This message has been edited by Sweetie01 (05-30-2006 04:51 PM).]

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

1 posted 2006-05-29 09:38 PM

this has really great...well everything, i like it...

~L

scyzoryk_o4
Junior Member

since 2006-05-23

Posts 36
Canada and Poland

2 posted 2006-05-29 09:44 PM

Hey,
Awesome poem, it’s strait from your heart so I’m sure it will go strait to any ones heart who reads it, it did to mine anyway.
Oh and I don’t wanna be rude or anything but I think u forgot a “r” in this line “And you arms are the first place I run from”

Maksym

Sweetie01
Junior Member

since 2006-05-15

Posts 28
NJ, USA

3 posted 2006-05-30 04:50 PM

thank you for the replies. Yea, I did miss an r, thanks for telling me.
~*~Amanda~*~

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