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Sweetpali08
Junior Member
since 2006-05-07
Posts 40


0 posted 2006-05-24 12:20 PM






It kills me deeply.
Deeply.
Knowing I meant no harm.
In loving someone who was out of my mind.
It kills me deeply,
Knowing that the affection I felt was all a simple game.
Turned to the other way.
I mean't no harm.
As long as the world is happy.
Was always my only reply.
You always seem to put me down.
For actions I never meant to do in my life.
Hurting was something I really needed to do.
And I succeeded without pride.
I digged in.
In and in with my teeth up your heart.
Never realizing that your love was actually true.

You sacrificed so much for me.
And yet now, Am not worth for you to look at.
Am a simple girl.
I know, I know ,I KNOW!
But I mean't no harm.
I know the only unique happiness that I would have found is within you.
But the game had to stop there.
Am moving to a different stage.
Moving to a different state.
Out of the world's way.
By soldiers and enemies who never give a damn if I may live or die.
And yet you want to hear my one last reply.

"Would this girl ever wait for me?"
My answer would be," It's too far out of my lead."
I haven't discussed where God might put me through yet"

I wanted to give you some part of my heart.
So you would see what you mean to me.
But through out the years,
I might need it to hold on to my greatest fears.
I can't keep more promises.
I kept enough stored in the past.

I mean't no harm
You need to find your way.
and I need to find mine.
I could swear to God.
"I mean't no harm"

"How are they the VICTIMS if they are the OCCUPIERS?!"
~Paradise now

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the_girl_next_door
Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591
USA
1 posted 2006-05-25 11:56 PM


I loved this...................... I mean.. I can't believe noone else has posted to this.. it's great.. it's unorganized.. repetitive.. confusing in some places.. but I understand it.. and  I love it. I love it BECAUSE I can tell that you wrote this with your heart.. I can feel the emotion you put into it. great great great job.. my favorite by you.. and the pic was a nice touch.. going in my library.. hope to hear more..
~Heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

Sweetpali08
Junior Member
since 2006-05-07
Posts 40

2 posted 2006-05-26 12:27 PM


Awww thank you. You are a sweetheart. Am hoping you would enjoy more soon and am glad I actually touched someone's heart with my poetry because usually my poems are too confusing.

Thanks :-}}}}}

"How are they the VICTIMS if they are the OCCUPIERS?!"
~Paradise now

PoeTik JusTice
Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186
California, USA
3 posted 2006-05-26 05:19 AM


Very beautiful!
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