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Fabiani
Member

since 2006-05-12

Posts 123
Mesa, Az

0 posted 2006-05-21 12:55 PM

There’s a cleric with a gun to my head

Constant images of crucifixes marked blood red

I see the contaminated dogs fixed to tarnished sheds

I see the decrepit women chained to disincarnating beds

It’s like I said

I dread the night Satan dies

God will rise and nail me a hell bent

Ill do my shift in the blaze

An eternity to find what I Broke

An Eternity to reap and sow

To plant the seed and watch it Bestow..

Life to encircle me in my Organic Robe

I plow in pristine rows

I’m a Pinocchio

With a broken nose

I’m a Moses with a shattered staff

I look death in the eyes and sardonically laugh

I hunger for the daylight but

I know I would crumble at the sight

Feebly dreaming of teaming life screaming for the knife

The squeal of that organism

Sends me back towards the imperial prison

With the Heretics Schism

I look thru the opaque prism

The scene is tinted crimson

My eyes gaze at the Goat on the sacrificial Slab

At the suicidal Arab

At the brainless Americans

Proliferating it’s with nothing to respire for fad

It’s a divine Sin

So I dream on with a prophetic Grin

I sit calm numbed by the gin

Im robotic in motion basically armored in tin

Im battery powered so I tend

to lose power but im easy to mend

"I'm floating the hoaming pigeon out hell's kitchen window
Left an SOS infested bottle nestled in his grip" Aesop Rock

Sweetie01
Junior Member

since 2006-05-15

Posts 28
NJ, USA

1 posted 2006-05-21 10:51 AM

Its an interesting and different poem, but I liked it. I think you are a very good writer and I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
Amanda<33

Pauline
Junior Member

since 2006-05-15

Posts 28
Island in the Sun...

2 posted 2006-05-21 05:22 PM

i liked it!

it's got great rhythm and rhyming but doesn't really make much sense???....that's probably why i liked it :-)

Fabiani
Member

since 2006-05-12

Posts 123
Mesa, Az

3 posted 2006-05-21 09:01 PM

yea there really wasn't ne point to it at all just a bunch of things that made no since

Thanks For the Feedback i really Appriciate it ^_^~ <3

[This message has been edited by Fabiani (05-23-2006 07:38 PM).]

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