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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world 
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Don't you know how long I've waited for you to come around, I've hoped and prayed you'd say a word, but from your lips there came no sound. Don't you know how much I wished you'd just be okay. The dying breath was all it took for life to take you away. Don't you know how thankful I am that life gave you a second try. All the tears it took to get you here were all worth the painful cries. Don't you know how much it hurts to know that you can't remember me, I wish I could take you back in time and open your eyes so you could see. Don't you remember our hearts made one, as we realized that you and me were true, Come back to me, show me you do, cause my heart is yours, that's nothing new. Don't you see how proud I am of you, You're starting to come back around, For a while you were so lost, and now you've finally been found. -Erin Enjoy and let me know what you think! AIM-blueyed angel940 |
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Junebug Junior Member
since 2006-04-23
Posts 40earth |
Hey, I really enjoyed this poem specially this part.... "Don't you know how much I wished you'd just be okay. The dying breath was all it took for life to take you away" it really relates to my heart...if that makes sence.....anyway this is totally awesome! Hope to see more from you <3~Me |
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