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Tempest
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since 2006-04-28
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dont eat paint chips!!!!

0 posted 2006-05-17 08:04 PM



Betwixt the heavens
Born of skies
On broken burning wings he flies
Wrought of evil
Crowned in flames
He is the king of many names

With a single blade
Bound in blood
The wallmakers treasure
Bring salvations flood

Through the darkness
The seven stood
Armed with bells
And willing to die for the greater good

Peace with a dream
Is what the seven sought
The bells are ringing
The king is caught

With a mighty crash
The blade was gone
With hopes that tomarrow
Will be a brighter dawn

As the smoke cleared
The seven stood tall
The bells are still ringing
In the song of lifes call

© Copyright 2006 Bryan Girton - All Rights Reserved
Fabiani
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since 2006-05-12
Posts 123
Mesa, Az
1 posted 2006-05-22 06:02 PM


awsome~! reminds me of one of my metal songs \m/ ^_^~
stargal
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since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
OR USA
2 posted 2006-05-29 02:44 AM


Hey Tempest,

Let me just say this is a very interesting post, and it's unlike anything i've read by you before.

This is a little bit darker, maybe even a little bit deeper... I'm not sure i understand all of it though.

Is the seven talking about any specific characters, or just the "heros" of the story?

I really enjoyed the first stanza though, it just drew me right into the poem, i just had to see more! and.. i wasn't disapointed, i enjoyed this a lot.

Thanks for sharing this, i can't wait to see more!

Also, i'm sorry i didn't reply on this one sooner, but i'm glad i didn't miss it.

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