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Tempest
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since 2006-04-28
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dont eat paint chips!!!!

0 posted 2006-05-16 06:15 PM



Get a glimpse of the past
As the shadows are being cast
Your heartbeat declines
Its rythm beats with mine
Twisted and turning
My faith is burning
But there is no savior today

You wish that you could wind back the clock
Because your time has stopped
Choke on ashes
Bleeding from the lashes
There is no savior today

© Copyright 2006 Bryan Girton - All Rights Reserved
the_girl_next_door
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since 2006-02-26
Posts 591
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1 posted 2006-05-16 07:42 PM


wow.. this was amazing.. I'm not quite sure I understand what you mean when you say "there is no savior today" but this was awesome.. goin in my library.

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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