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Teen Poetry #7

These Subtle Thoughts

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

0 posted 2006-05-14 02:34 PM

If I open my eyes
Will I see through your lies
If I open my startled mind
What will I find

Fall turns to ash
As my life seems to crash
It splinters
Its breaking
I cant stop myself from shaking
At these subtle thoughts of you

It hurts to move it hurts to breath
Flooding back are memories
Of what we used to be
Now only shodows of the past
As my life starts to crash
All the things we could have been
Are racing back again

Braced for the impact
Every thing goes black
At these subtle thoughts of you

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

1 posted 2006-05-14 03:06 PM

good i like it. nice job : )

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